Saturday, July 14, 2007

At The Back of The North Wind


This is a poem I wrote today after I finished ATBTNW. The only good part about this poem is that it is honest and it rhymes, which should be obvious seeing as I rhymed the first stanza with the same word twice. If you haven't read the book, you should. I now see why C.S. Lewis thought George McDonald was such a good writer.



At The Back of The North Wind:

I am selfish to depths unknown,
Having forgotten even family I’ve known,
Having not uttered a word nor utterance about them,
I’ve gone away and left them,

So now I will lift up prayers instead,
And pray their souls be kept while in bed,
I know I can’t do much for them here,
But You Lord can be far and also near,

So hold them tight within your arms,
Letting them only experience helpful harm,
I also ask that in the end,
They might lie with you,
At The Back of The North Wind.

I miss you all.

3 comments:

Philip W. Eubanks said...

I dig. It's from the heart. That's what counts. Just thought I'd pop by and let you know I do wish to check this thingy out. - B0lton

Brian said...

My dad tried to read this to my and my brother when we were younger but I think it was a little over our heads. Thanks for the post Tim, you've reminded me that I need to read it! I love The Princess and the Goblin by George MacDonald.

And nice poem. I like things that rhyme, it's easier on my simple mind.

Anonymous said...

People should read this.